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Im Zuge einer englsich Hausaufgabe habe ich nun eingie (viele) Gedichte verfasst und will mal eure Meinung dazu hören und mal hören,ob jemand selbst welche verfasst hat (von Outrider weiss ichs ja schon)
Ich geb zu,das erste ist ausm Netz geklaut (weiss aber keiner ) und ein großteil is von Liedern beeinflusst,die ich in den letzten 2 Stunden gehört habe ^^
Write your own Poet!
just fog,
where I saw only yesterday
it vanished
everything
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just fog,
in it I saw only yesterday
and it vanished
like snow
like rain
like everything else
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I watched the sky,
I saw a Bird fling through a cloud,
I never saw this bird again <<<<<< ich selbst
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It was a dawn of a new human kind,
It was our last best hope for peace,
It failed
But in the year of the great war,
It became something greater
Our last best hope for victory!
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it is a shining peak in the water
it breaks the waves,
it will win,
but how it is called?
Alinghi <<<<<<< ich selbst,total scheiße o_0
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Cause it´s so easy to tell a lie,
and it´s so easy to run and hide,
but it´s not easy to be alive.
This world is like a cage and I don´t think it´s fair
and I don´t even think, that anybody cares.
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You and me. Why?
Could we be together,
Inside this world of misery?
Why did I have to go and meet somebody like you?
Why do you have to go and hurt somebody like me?
How could you do somebody like that,
You know that I'm never coming back.
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What are you lookin’ for?
Everything ****s up today
So, who cares?
Everyone tells ****ed up lies,
Everyone gets a ****ed up job with a ****ed up pay
What should we do?
Where should we go?
These are questions,
And nobody cares about that shit
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Everyone is a fool.
Do you think so?
I don’t think so
Your asking why?
Take a look around! <<<<<<<<< ich selbst
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you think you are alone? – Yeah baby, you get it ! <<< ich selbst ^^
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The spring comes above,
The frog jumps over a wet rock
There wasn’t fog again. <<<<<<<<<<<<<< ich selbst
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A cat is crawling,
the snow will cover this place,
next shiny spring will come. <<<<<<<<<< ich selbst
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Walked into desert,
Find his destiny, his faith
Sand was wet of blood <<<<< ich selbst
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What can I see with closed eyes?
The universe? The sense of life?
I see a sand ocean!
But what does it mean? <<<<<< ich selbst
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I see sand ocean,
wind is blowing all the time.
The mouse jumps away <<<< ich selbst
Haikus sind voll cool ^^
am Anfang denkt man: wer bin uich denn als das ich Gedichte schreiben könnte??
wenn man sich dann aber mal 5min in die Materie vertieft,ist es gar nichtmal mehr so schwer
Ich geb zu,das erste ist ausm Netz geklaut (weiss aber keiner ) und ein großteil is von Liedern beeinflusst,die ich in den letzten 2 Stunden gehört habe ^^
Write your own Poet!
just fog,
where I saw only yesterday
it vanished
everything
-----------------------------------------------
just fog,
in it I saw only yesterday
and it vanished
like snow
like rain
like everything else
-----------------------------------------------
I watched the sky,
I saw a Bird fling through a cloud,
I never saw this bird again <<<<<< ich selbst
-----------------------------------------------
It was a dawn of a new human kind,
It was our last best hope for peace,
It failed
But in the year of the great war,
It became something greater
Our last best hope for victory!
-----------------------------------------------
it is a shining peak in the water
it breaks the waves,
it will win,
but how it is called?
Alinghi <<<<<<< ich selbst,total scheiße o_0
------------------------------------------------------
Cause it´s so easy to tell a lie,
and it´s so easy to run and hide,
but it´s not easy to be alive.
This world is like a cage and I don´t think it´s fair
and I don´t even think, that anybody cares.
------------------------------------------------------------------
You and me. Why?
Could we be together,
Inside this world of misery?
Why did I have to go and meet somebody like you?
Why do you have to go and hurt somebody like me?
How could you do somebody like that,
You know that I'm never coming back.
--------------------------------------------------------------
What are you lookin’ for?
Everything ****s up today
So, who cares?
Everyone tells ****ed up lies,
Everyone gets a ****ed up job with a ****ed up pay
What should we do?
Where should we go?
These are questions,
And nobody cares about that shit
----------------------------------------------------------
Everyone is a fool.
Do you think so?
I don’t think so
Your asking why?
Take a look around! <<<<<<<<< ich selbst
---------------------------------------------------------
you think you are alone? – Yeah baby, you get it ! <<< ich selbst ^^
----------------------------------------------------------
The spring comes above,
The frog jumps over a wet rock
There wasn’t fog again. <<<<<<<<<<<<<< ich selbst
-----------------------------------------------------------------------
A cat is crawling,
the snow will cover this place,
next shiny spring will come. <<<<<<<<<< ich selbst
-----------------------------------------------------------------------
Walked into desert,
Find his destiny, his faith
Sand was wet of blood <<<<< ich selbst
------------------------------------------------------------------------
What can I see with closed eyes?
The universe? The sense of life?
I see a sand ocean!
But what does it mean? <<<<<< ich selbst
------------------------------------------------------------------------
I see sand ocean,
wind is blowing all the time.
The mouse jumps away <<<< ich selbst
Haikus sind voll cool ^^
am Anfang denkt man: wer bin uich denn als das ich Gedichte schreiben könnte??
wenn man sich dann aber mal 5min in die Materie vertieft,ist es gar nichtmal mehr so schwer